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here is My draft piece of my holiday recount hope you like it.


 “Behind the kicker!” I yelled, I could feel the determination and the adrenaline rushing through my body. I was trying to think positive, you can do it Neil, you can...BOOM, before I new it all I could hear was the noise of rugby boots thumping on the ground trying to get a good grip. Without thinking I ran up with my team, now all I could hear was my dad yelling at me telling me to get in their. One by one bodies were dropping everywhere,”our defence is to good” I chuckled. But I spoke too soon a boy ran right into my atack zone, “finally some action” like a charging bull I knocked him clean off his feet. There was people all over me, it was so overwhelming, and my pore fingers was getting flattened by all the rugby boots. When I got home that day my family wanted to know all about it but all I wanted to do was sleep.