This is a recount about what I did on the holidays. The tool I used to publish it was Piktochart, I like it because is makes my work look flash. I am learning to use Personification in my work to put more detail into it. Hope you enjoy
Hi Neil, great to see you are taking initiative and getting your blog posts up! However, the background and text color are making this difficult to read. The cheeky pop up - very clever with your personification. Great to see success there. Keep it up!
What a good improvement this is. I admire how you worked to improve your writing and you respond to feedback well. Keep it up. I must say, this is the first recount I have read about gaming that is entertaining.
Hi Neil, great to see you are taking initiative and getting your blog posts up! However, the background and text color are making this difficult to read. The cheeky pop up - very clever with your personification. Great to see success there. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteWhat a good improvement this is. I admire how you worked to improve your writing and you respond to feedback well. Keep it up. I must say, this is the first recount I have read about gaming that is entertaining.
ReplyDeleteHi Neil its Aarav cool holiday recount about fortnite
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